{"id":2106,"date":"2021-09-17T15:58:22","date_gmt":"2021-09-17T15:58:22","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/www.thetalentcycle.co.uk\/?p=2106"},"modified":"2022-10-10T12:09:51","modified_gmt":"2022-10-10T12:09:51","slug":"personal-statement-5-top-tips","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/www.thetalentcycle.co.uk\/uncategorized\/personal-statement-5-top-tips\/","title":{"rendered":"Personal Statement &#8211; 5 Top Tips"},"content":{"rendered":"<div class=\"fusion-fullwidth fullwidth-box fusion-builder-row-1 fusion-flex-container nonhundred-percent-fullwidth non-hundred-percent-height-scrolling\" style=\"background-color: rgba(255,255,255,0);background-position: center center;background-repeat: no-repeat;border-width: 0px 0px 0px 0px;border-color:#e2e2e2;border-style:solid;\" ><div class=\"fusion-builder-row fusion-row fusion-flex-align-items-flex-start\" style=\"max-width:104%;margin-left: calc(-4% \/ 2 );margin-right: calc(-4% \/ 2 );\"><div class=\"fusion-layout-column fusion_builder_column fusion-builder-column-0 fusion_builder_column_1_1 1_1 fusion-flex-column\"><div class=\"fusion-column-wrapper fusion-flex-justify-content-flex-start fusion-content-layout-column\" style=\"background-position:left top;background-repeat:no-repeat;-webkit-background-size:cover;-moz-background-size:cover;-o-background-size:cover;background-size:cover;padding: 0px 0px 0px 0px;\"><div style=\"text-align:center;\"><span class=\" fusion-imageframe imageframe-none imageframe-1 hover-type-none\"><img decoding=\"async\" width=\"700\" height=\"466\" title=\"personal statement post\" src=\"https:\/\/www.thetalentcycle.co.uk\/wp-content\/uploads\/2021\/09\/personal-statement-post.jpg\" data-orig-src=\"https:\/\/www.thetalentcycle.co.uk\/wp-content\/uploads\/2021\/09\/personal-statement-post.jpg\" class=\"lazyload img-responsive wp-image-2516\" srcset=\"data:image\/svg+xml,%3Csvg%20xmlns%3D%27http%3A%2F%2Fwww.w3.org%2F2000%2Fsvg%27%20width%3D%27700%27%20height%3D%27466%27%20viewBox%3D%270%200%20700%20466%27%3E%3Crect%20width%3D%27700%27%20height%3D%27466%27%20fill-opacity%3D%220%22%2F%3E%3C%2Fsvg%3E\" data-srcset=\"https:\/\/www.thetalentcycle.co.uk\/wp-content\/uploads\/2021\/09\/personal-statement-post-200x133.jpg 200w, https:\/\/www.thetalentcycle.co.uk\/wp-content\/uploads\/2021\/09\/personal-statement-post-400x266.jpg 400w, https:\/\/www.thetalentcycle.co.uk\/wp-content\/uploads\/2021\/09\/personal-statement-post-600x399.jpg 600w, https:\/\/www.thetalentcycle.co.uk\/wp-content\/uploads\/2021\/09\/personal-statement-post.jpg 700w\" data-sizes=\"auto\" data-orig-sizes=\"(max-width: 640px) 100vw, 700px\" \/><\/span><\/div><div class=\"fusion-text fusion-text-1\"><p id=\"viewer-1i43b\" class=\"XzvDs _208Ie _1atvN _2QAo- _25MYV _2WrB- _1atvN public-DraftStyleDefault-block-depth0 public-DraftStyleDefault-text-ltr\"><span class=\"vkIF2 public-DraftStyleDefault-ltr\">So it&#8217;s that dreaded time of year again where Year 12s up and down the country are tearing their hair out trying to finalise and send off their UCAS applications. And the worst bit of all? The DREADED personal statement!! But don&#8217;t panic, it&#8217;s really not that bad! Here are my 5 Top Tips to help you smash your statement and watch the University offers come flooding in!<\/span><\/p>\n<div data-hook=\"rcv-block4\"><\/div>\n<div id=\"viewer-9atm1\" class=\"XzvDs _208Ie _1atvN _2QAo- _25MYV _2WrB- _1atvN public-DraftStyleDefault-block-depth0 public-DraftStyleDefault-text-ltr\"><span class=\"vkIF2 public-DraftStyleDefault-ltr\">\u00a0<\/span><\/div>\n<div data-hook=\"rcv-block5\"><\/div>\n<p id=\"viewer-2qlug\" class=\"XzvDs _208Ie _1atvN _2QAo- _25MYV _2WrB- _1atvN public-DraftStyleDefault-block-depth0 public-DraftStyleDefault-text-ltr\"><span class=\"vkIF2 public-DraftStyleDefault-ltr\">1) Use good formal English language (no &#8216;text speak&#8217;) but be authentic! Don&#8217;t be like Joey in Friends, putting your own words through a Thesaurus until they no longer make any sense; &#8216;baby Kangaroo Tribbiani&#8217; will get no offers this year!<\/span><\/p>\n<div data-hook=\"rcv-block6\"><\/div>\n<div id=\"viewer-9i8qr\" class=\"XzvDs _208Ie _1atvN _2QAo- _25MYV _2WrB- _1atvN public-DraftStyleDefault-block-depth0 public-DraftStyleDefault-text-ltr\"><span class=\"vkIF2 public-DraftStyleDefault-ltr\">\u00a0<\/span><\/div>\n<div data-hook=\"rcv-block7\"><\/div>\n<p id=\"viewer-70iag\" class=\"XzvDs _208Ie _1atvN _2QAo- _25MYV _2WrB- _1atvN public-DraftStyleDefault-block-depth0 public-DraftStyleDefault-text-ltr\"><span class=\"vkIF2 public-DraftStyleDefault-ltr\">2) Show your enthusiasm for further study of your subject. Explain why you want to dedicate more years of your life to studying the subject, why it matters to you, what you know already and what you want to learn more of. But don&#8217;t over egg it! If I had a \u00a31 for every statement I&#8217;d read starting with &#8216;I am fascinated&#8217; or &#8216;From an early age&#8217; &#8211; I&#8217;d be a very rich woman! And FYI, at 17 you ARE still an &#8216;early age&#8217; to those reading your statement! <\/span><\/p>\n<div data-hook=\"rcv-block8\"><\/div>\n<div id=\"viewer-cn2h6\" class=\"XzvDs _208Ie _1atvN _2QAo- _25MYV _2WrB- _1atvN public-DraftStyleDefault-block-depth0 public-DraftStyleDefault-text-ltr\"><span class=\"vkIF2 public-DraftStyleDefault-ltr\">\u00a0<\/span><\/div>\n<div data-hook=\"rcv-block9\"><\/div>\n<p id=\"viewer-9u730\" class=\"XzvDs _208Ie _1atvN _2QAo- _25MYV _2WrB- _1atvN public-DraftStyleDefault-block-depth0 public-DraftStyleDefault-text-ltr\"><span class=\"vkIF2 public-DraftStyleDefault-ltr\">3) Don&#8217;t just list the subjects you&#8217;re studying now (they can see this elsewhere on your application), but do talk about the benefits of them. Area you&#8217;ve enjoyed studying and why, what you want to learn more of, the skills you&#8217;ve picked up along the way and keep referring back to why this would be good for studying the degree. <\/span><\/p>\n<div data-hook=\"rcv-block10\"><\/div>\n<div id=\"viewer-3snpp\" class=\"XzvDs _208Ie _1atvN _2QAo- _25MYV _2WrB- _1atvN public-DraftStyleDefault-block-depth0 public-DraftStyleDefault-text-ltr\"><span class=\"vkIF2 public-DraftStyleDefault-ltr\">\u00a0<\/span><\/div>\n<div data-hook=\"rcv-block11\"><\/div>\n<p id=\"viewer-fn2vl\" class=\"XzvDs _208Ie _1atvN _2QAo- _25MYV _2WrB- _1atvN public-DraftStyleDefault-block-depth0 public-DraftStyleDefault-text-ltr\"><span class=\"vkIF2 public-DraftStyleDefault-ltr\">4) Use quotes sparingly!! Don&#8217;t be a clich\u00e9. You&#8217;ve only got a limited number of characters to sell why you want to study this subject &#8211; they want to hear this on your own words, not someone else&#8217;s. If you really do want to include a quote, make it a short one and make it relevant. <\/span><\/p>\n<div data-hook=\"rcv-block12\"><\/div>\n<div id=\"viewer-1ld97\" class=\"XzvDs _208Ie _1atvN _2QAo- _25MYV _2WrB- _1atvN public-DraftStyleDefault-block-depth0 public-DraftStyleDefault-text-ltr\"><span class=\"vkIF2 public-DraftStyleDefault-ltr\">\u00a0<\/span><\/div>\n<div data-hook=\"rcv-block13\"><\/div>\n<p id=\"viewer-12a18\" class=\"XzvDs _208Ie _1atvN _2QAo- _25MYV _2WrB- _1atvN public-DraftStyleDefault-block-depth0 public-DraftStyleDefault-text-ltr\"><span class=\"vkIF2 public-DraftStyleDefault-ltr\">5) Don&#8217;t keep procrastinating, just make a start! You&#8217;ll have to do many versions of this so get started &#8211; it won&#8217;t be perfect first time but once you have something on paper you can go back and tweak where necessary. Don&#8217;t get too hung up on word count either, you know it&#8217;ll be approx. 1 page long so keep within that and focus on the content before you worry about the specific word count &#8211; you can always tweak wording after to make it fit. <\/span><\/p>\n<div data-hook=\"rcv-block14\"><\/div>\n<div id=\"viewer-8dsi5\" class=\"XzvDs _208Ie _1atvN _2QAo- _25MYV _2WrB- _1atvN public-DraftStyleDefault-block-depth0 public-DraftStyleDefault-text-ltr\"><span class=\"vkIF2 public-DraftStyleDefault-ltr\">\u00a0<\/span><\/div>\n<div data-hook=\"rcv-block15\"><\/div>\n<p id=\"viewer-c7ail\" class=\"XzvDs _208Ie _1atvN _2QAo- _25MYV _2WrB- _1atvN public-DraftStyleDefault-block-depth0 public-DraftStyleDefault-text-ltr\"><span class=\"vkIF2 public-DraftStyleDefault-ltr\">For more help and advice you can also look at the <a class=\"_1fYLo _2N2cN\" href=\"https:\/\/www.thetalentcycle.co.uk\/blog\/hashtags\/UCAS\" target=\"_self\" rel=\"noopener\">#UCAS<\/a> website page abut personal statements: <a class=\"_2qJYG _2E8wo\" href=\"https:\/\/www.ucas.com\/undergraduate\/applying-university\/how-write-ucas-undergraduate-personal-statement\" target=\"_top\" rel=\"noopener noreferrer\"><u class=\"sDZYg\">https:\/\/www.ucas.com\/undergraduate\/applying-university\/how-write-ucas-undergraduate-personal-statement<\/u><\/a><\/span><\/p>\n<div data-hook=\"rcv-block16\"><\/div>\n<div id=\"viewer-43toa\" class=\"XzvDs _208Ie _1atvN _2QAo- _25MYV _2WrB- _1atvN public-DraftStyleDefault-block-depth0 public-DraftStyleDefault-text-ltr\"><span class=\"vkIF2 public-DraftStyleDefault-ltr\">\u00a0<\/span><\/div>\n<div data-hook=\"rcv-block17\"><\/div>\n<p id=\"viewer-f304t\" class=\"XzvDs _208Ie _1atvN _2QAo- _25MYV _2WrB- _1atvN public-DraftStyleDefault-block-depth0 public-DraftStyleDefault-text-ltr\"><span class=\"vkIF2 public-DraftStyleDefault-ltr\">And if you&#8217;re looking for a qualified opinion, contact me for advice on your personal statement with a guaranteed 24hr turnaround. I&#8217;ll give you tips and advice on what you have already and how to make it a winning statement, for the small investment of \u00a350. 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